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LuzAzul Chapter 1

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5 policemen are staring at a door in a hotel.
Policeman 1: Come on out!
Policeman 2: Kick down the door.
Policeman 1 kicks down the door. They all move in and look around and no one is there.
Policeman 2: What the hell is going on?
Suddenly a boy appears (Fleo) behind policeman 2 and breaks his neck.
Policeman 3: There!
All of the policemen aim their guns at Fleo and start to shoot him. Fleo then falls over backwards and slams into the floor. Police man 3 walks over to Fleo and looks at him.
Policeman 3: He’s dead.
They all turn around and Fleo gets up and is right behind policeman 3.
Fleo: Who’s dead?
Fleo draws his sword and slashes policeman 3 in half and then runs towards the other policemen. The other policemen all turn around and starts to fire at Fleo but Fleo just let’s himself get shot and continues to run forward to the policemen and Fleo holds out his hand and stabs it through policeman 4 and holds his heart in his hand and squashes it.
Policeman 5 runs out of the door.
Policeman 5: Shit!
Policeman 1 looks at Fleo in fear.
Policeman 1: What the hell are you!?
Policeman holds up his gun and Fleo cuts it. Policeman 1 falls back near a window and looks at Fleo and Fleo smiles.
Fleo: What am I...?
Policeman pulls out a hand gun and shoots Fleo in the head.
Fleo: An immortal!
Fleo kicks Policeman 1 out of the window.
Fleo: Hahahaha! What fun this is.
Policeman 5 runs out of the building.
Chief: What is happening? Where are the others?
Policeman 5: It... It... Won’t die...
Chief: Speak sense.
Policeman 5 falls to the ground with a gun wound in his back and Fleo is seen holding up a gun.
Chief: A kid!?
Fleo walks down the steps and holds out his gun and fires at a car and it explodes.
Chief: What!? No way could a gun to that much damage.
Chief: Stop right there!
Fleo stops.
Chief: Drop the gun kid and lie down on the floor.
Fleo just stands there.
Chief: Kid.... Drop the gun.
Fleo disappear.
Chief: !
Fleo appears behind the chief and holds the gun to his head. The rest of the policemen hold up their guns to Fleo.
Fleo: Is this all you have to offer? Not a real challenge is it.
Chief: What are you talking about?
Fleo: This is no fun.
Chief: You were doing this for fun!
Fleo: For world domination.
Chief: What are you talking about?
Fleo: I’m going to bring this world to its knees, like I almost did 100’s of years ago.
Chief: Your crazy...
Fleo: I see straight in this world.
The chief ducks.
Chief: Fire!
Fleo gets shot at and when they shop he is still standing. Fleo then starts to fire at all of the policemen until they die. Fleo then walks over to the chief.
Chief: What the hell are you?
Fleo: An immortal.
Fleo shoots the chief and then looks up. Fleo them walks up the wall of the building he came out of and reaches the top.
Person: Welcome.
Fleo: Seems the fun will start soon.
Person: Very true, I am Dorcaza. A hunter of monsters like yourself.
Fleo smiles.
Dorcaza: Slaughtering all of the people in this hotel, what did you gain from it?
Fleo: It cured my boredom.
Dorcaza: You really are a monster aren’t you?
Fleo holds out his gun.
Fleo: Enough chat, time for one of us to die... You know how to kill an immoral don’t you.... Dorcaza?
Dorcaza: Indeed I do...
Dorcaza draws his gun.
Dorcaza: Let’s not waste anymore time then.
Dorcaza and Fleo start to fire at each other and they dodge each other’s bullets, Dorcaza reloads and Fleo continues to fire and Dorcaza dodges them.
Fleo: Excellent, you will be fun to play with.
Fleo smiles.
Dorcaza: You don’t reload!? What kind of gun is that!
Fleo: The bullets are made with my own magical energy.
Dorcaza: Magic!?
Fleo: Of course, how else would I have lived for 100’s of years?
Dorcaza: 100’s of years... I see, then I have lost.
Fleo: ? Giving up?
Dorcaza: An immortal can die by old age.... Running out their natural lifespan... But cannot be killed by an illness or damage, the life’s they gain is equal to the number of people you have killed.
Fleo: Correct, what does that have to do with giving up?
Dorcaza: Heh, how many people have you killed? You just killed a hotel full of people, even children... How many have you killed over the decade... 50 years.... 100 years...? I don’t stand a chance.
Fleo: Then, I was wrong about you, you are no fun.
Dorcaza: How said I saw giving up! I’ll just take as many lives as I can before I die!
Dorcaza shoots Fleo in the head and Fleo falls backwards and then Fleo jumps up.
Fleo: Great! Let’s have some fun.
Fleo and Dorcaza start to fire at each other again and Dorcaza gets his arm hit. Fleo puts his gun away and draws his sword. Fleo jumps forward and tries to slash Dorcaza but Dorcaza dodges all the slashes. Dorcaza jumps back and fires at Fleo and Fleo spins his sword and catches all of the bullets on the end of his blade. He then puts all of the bullets into his hand and throws them at Dorcaza and gets hit by all of them, Fleo walks over to Dorcaza.
Fleo: You were fun.
A helicopter appears above Fleo and Fleo then looks over the edge and there are more police and people down there and a camera man zooms in on Fleo.
Second chief: There he is, on the roof!
Fleo: Fun!

End of chapter 1.
My second manga project I have been working on.

P.S. Please excuse any mistakes.
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i like it aj i really do